Fascination

by Aure   Jan 12, 2011


Dragging chained behind him,
Freedom flirting with me.
And I still keep on
Flirting with his shackles.

Catch me in your arms,
A stronghold unbreakable.
Send adrenaline spikes,
Through my veins.

My mind your perfect prison.
My fascination keeping you,
And my fascination keeping me.
With you in my own jail.

In my dreams breaking free,
Tracking the path I drew.
Hoping my words don't betray,
Me as I speak in my sleep.

Waking up, still tired
And take up my daily
Mission leaving you,
In memories fading.

Memories that were never,
Never true, imaginary,
Involuntary every time
Your eyes catch mine.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    "Flirting with his shackles"

    Best line I have read in a long time ^^..that was just an incredible statement I loved it!

    My mind your perfect prison.
    My fascination keeping you,
    And my fascination keeping me.
    With you in my own jail.

    ^ I really liked this stanza because it really made me think about the mind..and how truly fascinating it is that we can toy with someone or trap someone simply by playing mind games...

    This was an icredible write. Theres only one person on this site that I read their non rhyming poetry, but I think you've just made that 2!
    Chelsey

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I did not like the line
    "Flirting with his shackles"
    I feel you could have come up with a better line or worded it differenly so that it had more feeling

    apart from that you have a good poem here. I especially liked this part:
    "My mind your perfect prison.
    My fascination keeping you,
    And my fascination keeping me.
    With you in my own jail."

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    Love the lines:

    My mind your perfect prison.

    Involuntary every time
    Your eyes catch mine.

    ^^^

    It's almost kind of dark, i like it :)

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