Trust... is all i need.

by XoXoBriannaoXoX   Jul 11, 2008


I told u I love u and I meant it all.
u were all I need and still you are!
I dream that we are meant to be I think we are but I know that you are the
World to me!

I hope I mean as much to you as you mean to me.
And all that I can do is dream that you actually meant it when
You said u loved me!

That I mean so much to you.
When you have hurt me so much how can I ever trust u?!?!

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  • 15 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Once again there is feeling
    but all else is lacking
    the rhyme is all EEE sounds and you use ME too much
    and rhythm is not even present
    3/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I liked it, although i agree with the above comments from Jaimee and amber, if you described it a bit more, and added a bit more emotion, it would be better. But its a great writ, just again, the paragraph formation. But i liked it apart from that!. 5/5x

  • 15 years ago

    by hope

    I like this poem it.
    it relates to me at the moment my and my boyfriend just broke up and he said i ment everything to him so i don't know whats a lie and whats the truth anymore..
    Keep up the good work
    5/5
    xx Hope
    Take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    I love the last lines
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaimee

    I liked it, but there's not that much emotion involved. I'm sure that if you put a little more detail it'll be perfect. =]

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