My Love

by the girl in blue   Jul 14, 2008


Just as the sun sets and rises each day,
My love for you comes and goes.
Like the sun hidden behind the clouds,
My love is sometimes out of view.
Like the stars lit up around the moon,
My love is great but scattered.
Just as the sun and moon share time,
My love must take it's time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BabiiGirl

    I loved this poem, short but cute! 5/5 keep on writing! =)

  • 17 years ago

    by SongBird

    This is breath taking!
    i love it!
    well written!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is really cute, very meaningful:

    "Like the sun hidden behind the clouds,
    My love is sometimes out of view."

    ^My favorite part, worderd perfectly!!

    I like how you use similes in this poem, makes it really good.

    So nice work, keep writing! :)

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