My guitar, My escape.

I really liked this one. It has a unique concept and the flow was great. It showed a lot of emotion as well... very good write.

I like this, I don't play guitar or anything but I can definatly respect the escape... thanks for the comment by the way

I respect your talent. you write about whats most important to you and that is a very good way of writing. that way you can truly explain your emotions toward it.

Haha People have been rough on you. You need to add some sort of structure, and art into this. It's almost like you're talking to a person right in front of you, instead of reading a poem.

This is a really great poem. you have a great gift. if this is really true about you and you play the guitar as an escaped then keep it up everyone needs a way to escape their own lives. for me its dance. keep it up. 5/5