HURT
by Alex Jul 17, 2008
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As i sit at home for to call, your friends call me looking for you but no one has heard i go to a party and hope you will call but the call i get is not the one i wanted, it's your best friend i say hello and he starts to cry he says your name says your hurt and it's bad i start to cry them he hangs up after the party i call him back and he tells me the whole story and we start to cry again. |
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15 years ago
by Hollywood
I liked it i mean it could be better like more descriptive and emotional but it was a great outline!
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15 years agoby Kimberley
Aww. its so sad. confusing but i think i got the overall message. 5/5. KM
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15 years ago
I'm sorry about this.:( I have lost someone mt dearest to me. If u want Please read my poem titled FARE WELL OLGA!!!!!!!!!!
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15 years ago
This is great!!
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15 years ago
by smiley
Umm it kind of cunfuzed me but i give it 3
