You left me wanting you.

by xXBloodyXKissesXx   Jul 18, 2008


I remember the day i said yes,
a rush of adrenaline came to my chest.
We were together for a few months until,
here comes this girl with your heart to steal.

We were perfect for each other,
we were here for one another.
i loved you like never before,
but now I'm left assured.

You held me tight,
we hardly ever had to fight
You always got your way,
and everything was all okay.

Until the day she stole you,
it left my heart in two.
I wish you understood,
the pain inside, oh how i wish you would.

I wish i could have you back!!
But after all the you lack.
Things are so plain,
I think I'm going insane.

I don't know why,
but when i tell someone i'm left with a sigh.
I've made the cuts so deep,
I'm restless, i can not sleep.

I need some care,
I wish you would've been there.
I need you but you'll never ever see,
You and me,
We were meant to be.

**Indeed, this poem is true. So please comment or have any questions to be asked. I'm here.

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  • 15 years ago

    by NiRo

    This is an awsome poem
    it did relate to me a couple months ago
    but i learned that i don't need a boy in my life to make me happy
    and well for the girl he left me for, well we used to be best friends, until she stole him
    i realised if he left me for her than hes not worthy enough for me.
    me n my ex bf is now just a friend, its hard to trust her though, but i still love her.
    oh n thanx for the comment.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Welll , i have much to say here, :

    frist on structure, the poem feelings and subject and the wy you describe it make it very intresting , to read
    you should split to paragraph and work the rhyming through ,

    but as the content of this poem since it is true ,
    i might add somthing if i may ,
    remmber girl it is my belef ins some way , that if 2 pepole are met to be together , no force on earth can stop , and if they dont , no matter how all the world try , they wont

    second , cuts, and depression , are not the way to healing girl , if they are all humans would do it ,
    we be sad we greef but we get over it and continue our lifes,

    we keep the memories, of a hapy day , so we can live another day !!

  • 15 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    I really love this poem...
    This is beautiful...
    One of my favorites...

  • 15 years ago

    by Trevors Baby Girl Forever

    This is so true. Ive been through it all. Whatever does kill us only makes us stonger. Remember that. Life isnt always fair.

  • 15 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Very well written i really love this poem you did a wondeful job !

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