Your fool in love

by StefQ   Jul 19, 2008


When bells ring, that sunny day,
As we sit beneath the tree
Talking and laughing away.
When white clouds appear in the sky,
As we talk beneath the tree,
I'll be looking in your eyes

And then, I will tell you all
By whispering these words;
I'm in love with you...

When hummingbirds fly above,
As we kiss beneath the tree,
You'll know I'm your fool in love.

And then, I'll tell you all again,
By whispering these words,
I'm in love with you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    I just lived ur poem...It created a beautiful imaginary ! It had a crisp delicate touch. Awesome,love lasts forever...!

  • 15 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    I like this one. It's a feeling alot of people can relate to, as well as me. I like your style of writin as well. It rhymes, but not ever line has to. And you still make it sounds pretty good. 5/5