Where our love once started

by StefQ   Jun 15, 2006


Do you remember that summer day,
The song I played on my guitar
The time we first kissed
Do you remember what we once were?
I played every game
Since the day you left
I reached the top and fell to the bottom,
But nothing is what it is, from the day you left
I memorize your smiles, your tears,
The time our feelings were true
Nobody knows how hard it burns
Or how strong it freezes without you

So sing our song, for one last time
By you and I , the words are known...
I'm waiting for you at the place
Where our love once started

Do you remember the smell of winter
That horrible October without snow
When the grey fog filled the streets
Do you still know
Those awful rainy mornings
When the birds seldom visited the streets
I walked every road a million times
And still I can't forget our hearts beat
Since you've left sun never shines
Deep in my heart that belongs to you
I memorize your smiles, your tears,
The time our feelings were true
Nobody knows how hard it burns
Or how strong it freezes without you

So sing our song, for one last time
By you and I, the words are known...
I'm waiting for you at the old place
Where our love once started...

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  • 17 years ago

    by JAMIE

    Great poem. i love how the last stanza repeats some lines from the rest of the poem

    jamie

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    "Do you remember the smell of winter
    That horrible October without snow
    When the grey fog filled the streets
    Do you still know
    Those awful rainy mornings
    When the birds seldom visited the streets
    I walked every road a million times
    And still I can't forget our hearts beat
    Since you've left sun never shines
    Deep in my heart that belongs to you
    I memorize your smiles, your tears,
    The time our feelings were true
    Nobody knows how hard it burns
    Or how strong it freezes without you"

    ^^^ Amazing.. I havent read something this good in sooo long.. the whole thing was so great but that part expecially was just amazing.. Great job keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    GREAT JOB! I think that By you and me should be chaanged to By you and I

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I'm not much one to comment on soemthing that could very well be a song so I'm afraid I might not be much help. I do have to say that I did enjoy the final stanza, especially the part about where love first started, and I enjoyed your descriptions.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Dowlly

    I enjoyed reading this poem, i especially liked the lines
    "Nobody knows how hard it burns
    Or how strong it freezes without you"
    I think you did a great job! 5/5

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