Without You I Am.

by Spoken Silence   Jul 21, 2008


** I found this which I wrote 2 years ago. Thought I would post it. **

I'm broken,
Unwanted,
And torn.
Without you I am.

Selfish,
Confused,
And crying.
Without you I am.

Outspoken,
Diffected,
And changed.
Without you I am.

Alone,
Depressed,
And lonely.
Without you I am.

Singing,
out of tune,
And horrible.
Without you I am.

Cold,
Scared,
And greedy.
Without you I am.

Secretive,
Compressed
And cold.
Without you I am.

Happy,
Loved,
And cared for.
With you, I'm perfect.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is an absolute gem that you have posted. The repeated 'without you I am' is so rhythmic, so enchanting and so necessary when tied in with its opposite at the poems end. Such sadness, combined with a ray of hope!!

    Well done

    Michael