You're In For A Surprise

by xMisSxMassacrEx   Jul 22, 2008


Emotions Get The Best Of Me
But They Won't Tonight.
They Always Seem To Use Me
But, This Time I Think I'll Fight.

All This Time I Told Myself
That You Could Be Trusted
But Now I See The Reality
And I'm Truly Disgusted.

To Me It Was Something Real
To You It Was A Game.
Now I'm Left Here All Alone
While You're With Whats-Her-Name.

The Tears Are Quite Overdue
The Pain Will Subside
And As For The Loneliness
I'll Set It All Aside.

I Refuse To Let This Burden
Drape Upon My Pride.
I Will No Longer Tolerate
The Depression You Supplied.

So To The Girl Who Has Him,
The One That Stole "The Prize"
Congratulations, Honey
You're In For A Surprise.

For You Don't See It Coming
You're Ignoring The Sign.
The One Where He Rips Out Your Heart
Like He Did To Mine.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    "Emotions Get The Best Of Me
    But They Won't Tonight.
    They Always Seem To Use Me
    But, This Time I Think I'll Fight." <<with that first stanza it really got my attention, like i wanted to know more what you were talking about. what's she ganna do? whats going on? that sorta thing. great beginning

    the third stanza was good as well, the whats-her-name kinda made me grin, 'cause it sounded like you were getting fed up and wanting to slap someone. which led well to the fourth part.

    and all the rest was really good and flowing. i loved the ending (last two stanza's) they were good because the words you put in snapped at the girl you were talking about and that was easily caught.

    terrific read. 5/5

    ~tia

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