Daddys little girl

by angelis   Jul 24, 2008

It was all so sudden
She was just a little girl
Without a chance in this cold world

Once her mom had died
She was left alone
Until her dad came and gave her a home

He fed her, clothed her and made her happy
She would do anything to please her daddy
He even gave her a sweet little bear
That she began to carry everywhere
He gave her a chance
to survive in this world
He made her one happy little girl

Then one day she woke up really scared
She had just arisen from a nightmare
She dreamed her father had died in his sleep
Without a sound, without a peep

She went to his room to wake him up
But something was wrong
his eyes stayed shut
She tugged and tugged but he was gone
And she knew her dream was right all along

She took her bear and silently cried
But at least she had something to remember him by...


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  • 12 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Hi! I give u 5/5 coz we have 1thin in commen! I love poems that rhyme too. And for ur poem is really nice.. If u take a look on my poems, plz tell about ur opinion coz i try to write rhymes too.. Good luck.:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Great poem!! 5/5 very sad though T_T

    one of the best I read all day ^^

  • 13 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Wow this poem is so strong i can feel the emotions in this poem its beautiful!!! I love it. If this is true i am very sorry tho from the bottom of my heart u if u want to please read my poem FARE WELL OLGA!!!!!!!!!! I can relate to this poem i no what u feel. :(

  • 13 years ago

    by Kait

    Oh my goodness. what a great poem. very well written and you expressed emotions wonderfully. if you don't mind me asking, did this really happen to you?

    none the less, 5/5 :)

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