My light

by Pauly D.   Jun 3, 2004


I'm thinking about you,
Wondering if your doing the same.
I'm hoping that you still care,
How you did in that perfect way.

I wanna see your eyes,
As the beauty shines right through.
Remembering all the joys,
When it was only me and you.

My every last thought,
Fixating on times gone by.
For you, I've always sought,
I never questioned why.

I don't want us to be,
Just something of the past.
I want you to see,
That we can make this last.

I care for you now,
Forever, tonight.
I need you somehow,
To fill my world with light,

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fatimah

    Awww Paul, that was a VERY sweet poem.. I was about to vote twice! Really Really SwEet it touched me deeply :)
    I especially loved these lines:
    I wanna see your eyes,
    As the beauty shines right through.
    Remembering all the joys,
    When it was only me and you.

    truth is I loved it all :D
    Keep it on & we'll keep watchin' ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Pauly D.

    thanks for the comment and the upbringing of my spirit, matt, and as always thanx for the comment, kristina....

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey Paul. Great work. You did a fine job in composing this piece of poetry. Keep up the great work and thanks for always commenting on my work. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.
    Hope to hear from you soon.
    Always,
    Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg

    Good stuff you have there Pauly. So you don't want it to just be of the past. I'm sure you will have your dream in the future. Good job. Keep up the good work.

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