Dreaming

by Raychil   Jul 30, 2008


Not one more blink
Not one more stir
The world fades
Into one big blur

Eyes grown hazy
So very weak
Your body is crashing
As you fall into sleep

It all goes black
And colors start to mesh
You start to see images
Your memories fresh

People you know
Or in your mind
They come to visit
For a short time

The adventures are fake
Yet seem so real
The moments you take
The things that you feel

Imaginary creatures
Imaginary places
Yet they'll leave no imprint
They'll leave no traces

Once you awake
Its though they never were
And all that your dreamed
Fades into a blur.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lori

    Once you awake
    Its thought they never were
    And all that your dreamed
    Fades into a blur.

    Favorite line there Raychil! Wow! That is all I got to say. I love it. The thing that really draws me into this piece is that you can relate to it so well. This has happened to me alot actually. Great write Raych, your an inspiration:) 5/5

    <3 Loni

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