Dad#1

by H E Losey   Aug 3, 2008


A boy has many heroes
Many strangers he admires
But as through life he goes
'Tis toward his father he aspires

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was short but definatly a touching little write. The little rhyme you had going was good. I know you can always add more to these though.. I think you have the potential to do it. Good job though.. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great rhyme and wording, you have created a short but touching piece of poetry. Great work. Keep writing, always and forever...

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