My life

by coolaziz   Aug 3, 2008


Is it my lot and my destiny
that life is so hard on me?
A m i to be living forever in misery
like a lost boat rocked by the sea?

Why i am always so sad and mad
and in love my luck is so bad
No moments of happiness or joy
only loneliness since i was a boy.

With a relentless rope or a knife
i would put an end to that feverish life
Death is my resort my haven
my relief from that burden.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Xx Alone in my Quandary xX

    Well i liked the last stanza
    "With a relentless rope or a knife
    i would put an end to that feverish life
    Death is my resort my haven
    my relief from that burden."
    overall it was easy to go through.!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Spoiled Princess

    This is good.. I liked it but I like the ending in the other two better!! lol

  • 15 years ago

    by Asher

    I enjoy it

    ((5))

  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Good read the word flow was good a little wordy for me otherwise well done.

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