Twisted Illusion's

by sarah debrincat   Aug 5, 2008


Twisted illusions,
crazy dreams,
showing me things i am yet to see.

reality's fading,
i dont know where i am,
someone help me understand.

lost and bewilderd,
in a land unknown,
not knowing where to go.

around and around,
side to side,
up and down,
TIME TO HIDE.

with crazy thought's
screaming in my head,
to haunting whispers
that are unwantingly said,
without the safety of humanity
it is I alone who faces this insanity.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Hey, ANOTHER AUSSIE!!!!!!!
    anyway-bout your poem-i really like it-
    It has a great flow, is easy to read but still holds uncertainty and the emotions of someone who is confused and starting to fee like theyre going insane-i think it really captures that.
    Great work
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Great job it flowed very well! good job with the rhyme scheme

  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Nice! that poem flows very nicely liked it alot! 5/5

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