The Last Tear.

Life is a bi**, it is not true, because i think life is a guy , because he fu** us all

if youa re looking for sympathy you will not find it like this,

either you get string by your slef , or live like this in humiliation adn sadness the rest of your miserable life

you expressed your poem really good ,
despite the sorrow comeing out that mess teh stanzaz structure a bit , but it is understandble
and rhyming is not availibe a lot ,

some stanzas 3 lines some 4

not good ,

you should work more on this aspects

great work

If you want my opignion take this anger and use it to change your life facts,
and take this sorrow , and turn it to strong will

you can not make an man see you , nor can a man make a girl see him

It is good to shout , and it is good to cry ,

but all have a time ,