She is

This poem was very sweet, Nate. Love should be that overwhelming always, don't you think?
I saw a few flaws in interpunction and grammar that I have changed in the version below. When you copy it to Word and compare, you will see what I mean. With the minor changes, your poem will shine even more:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

She's in my heart
she's in my soul
she's in my blood
she is my whole
she is my life
thats all I need
if I'm shot
I shall not bleed
for she is my eternal shield
and when I fight I will not yield
for she is me
and I am her
I love her so
she is my world

^^

the last lines were so very cute!

To the world you could eb one person, but to one person you could be the world

I love you baby!!

This is great. "She" sounds amazing.

WOW IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!