She is

by Nate the philosopher   Aug 9, 2008


She's in my heart
she's in my soul
she's in my blood
she is my whole
she is my life
thats all i need
if I'm shot
i shall not bleed
for she is my eternal shield
and when i fight i will not yield
for she is me
and i am her
i love her so
she is my world

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem was very sweet, Nate. Love should be that overwhelming always, don't you think?
    I saw a few flaws in interpunction and grammar that I have changed in the version below. When you copy it to Word and compare, you will see what I mean. With the minor changes, your poem will shine even more:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

    She's in my heart
    she's in my soul
    she's in my blood
    she is my whole
    she is my life
    thats all I need
    if I'm shot
    I shall not bleed
    for she is my eternal shield
    and when I fight I will not yield
    for she is me
    and I am her
    I love her so
    she is my world

    ^^

    the last lines were so very cute!

  • 15 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    To the world you could eb one person, but to one person you could be the world

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashley Q

    I love you baby!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mx26

    This is great. "She" sounds amazing.

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!

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