by StonedGooberz Aug 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
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Feelings that i long |
by Freedom
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I like to read ur poems,coz most of it about love :) and this one i loved as well.impressive: |
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I think this a good poem, but one thing i would change in the second paragraph is from |
by Brittany C
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2nd stanza 3rd line "trying to to find love" you should probably take out one of the "to". Other then that it is a great poem that I greatly enjoyed. 5/5 |