Soothe

by StonedGooberz   Aug 15, 2008


Feelings that i long
escape like an icy breath
freezing my heart
ever silent in death

my emotions have lost control
it hurts to keep it all in
trying to to find love
but only dying in the end

love bleeding from
the Rose petals of red
I'm tired of this hurt
again and over again

someone soother my mind
let me breathe once more
with feeling i cannot name
healing what was once sore

make me believe again
that its easy to love you
simply because i do
with a love thats true

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  • 15 years ago

    by Freedom

    I like to read ur poems,coz most of it about love :) and this one i loved as well.impressive:

    make me believe again
    that its easy to love you
    simply because i do
    with a love thats true

  • 15 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    I think this a good poem, but one thing i would change in the second paragraph is from
    "my emotions have lost control
    it hurts to keep it all in
    trying to to find love
    but only dying in the end"
    to
    " my emotions have lost control
    it hurts to keep it all in
    trying to find love
    but only dying in it's sin"
    but that's just my opinion, this poem was really good though, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    2nd stanza 3rd line "trying to to find love" you should probably take out one of the "to". Other then that it is a great poem that I greatly enjoyed. 5/5

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