An Angel

by NoUr   Aug 20, 2008


AN ANGEL:

When we were children,
We all dreamed to grow up and be something
Some wanted to fly or build
Others wanted to cure or invent

Personally, I wanted to fly
I aimed the sky to reach & touch
Thinking that I belonged up high
Since, on earth I have been lost

But not by a plane I wished to escape,
With my wings that I wish I had
Being a pilot was not my dream,
An angel to be was mine..

A beautiful image was drawn,
In my mind by my beloved mom
"cute & adorable angelic babies,
all lived where my dream was"

Wishing to be one of them,
As to hide up there unreachable
Whenever a human comes near
For they are creatures I should terribly fear

Praying god till now to transform me,
To give me these cute wings I longed for,
Wearing a lovely white dress my outfit towards liberty,
Only an angel to be will set me free..

*I thought god had many angelic babies up there, giving them to women who wanted to have children.. god!! why do I have to grow up:(..yeah all human i should fear except u coz ur an angel my dear;) *

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A beautiful image was drawn,
    In my mind by my beloved mom
    "cute & adorable angelic babies,
    all lived where my dream was"

    ^^^I love these lines Nour:)
    You are still so very innocent and I admire that in a young girl. Please never change:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    An angel :( wings :( fly:( how can i draw tears shapped word in this line ...........

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Aw how cute..I love the idea so much.
    love the last line the most
    Idk what else to say..great write :)

    keep it up
    xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. This is beautiful. I think you did a wonderful job on this. I only have one.. suggestion, I guess.. you should pay closer attention to the beginning of your lines. Some of them are capitalized, and some are not. I think you should form some pattern. Other than that, it's great!

    Five out of five. [5/5]

    ``Briana

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good poem... Enjoyed it. Description is good and it flows... well! Keep writing!