When im with you

by MERCY is never shown   Aug 21, 2008


Only when I'm with you
can i see myself
clearly enough to
see I'm not only me
I'm wasting away
in a world i cant overcome
only when I'm with you
do i become more than me
your eyes have seen
every mistake
your hands have touched
every scar
and at these moments
i saw myself as
worthless and undeserving
but your love showed me
i was more than that
that i could be
more than me
but only when I'm with you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    Lovely poem.. your choice of words and how the poem flows are great! Maybe you should explain things more or give more detail. You know, Create imagery. Besides that everything is lovely!

  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww very sweet and absolutely true. True love accepts a person, over looks all the imperfections and makes a perfect angel out of that person, you explained that very beautifuly and very well.

    you're so good at this, keep it up !

    5/5

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