My escape

Wow.very emotonal. very powerful

I really liked this. I know exactly the emotion you put out in this poem. 5/5 :)

I pay no mind
to the blood flaking from my skin
^^ i do not think i have ever heard it described like that i thought it was original and it grabbed my attention.

this short of nothing
living hell
^^ sounds like some of my bad days. i think everyone can relate to this feeling of being in a living hell it was a phenomenal way to describe it

I think everyone knows the feeling of needing someone to take them away and be their escape. those type of people make this world bearable and if you have someone like that, hang onto them. I thought your writing was great. The only thing i would suggest is separate things into stanzas other than that amazing : )

5/5 !! for sure

Wow, this poem has so much emotion behind it. I think it is very well written. You had some very strong lines among the whole piece!

5/5

Short and sweet... Full with love... In short its awesome (5/5)