I'm no angel

by MERCY is never shown   Nov 9, 2009

I'm no princess
and I'm no angel
but he changed that
he made me believe
i could be more than me
i make mistakes
i trip and fall
these cuts start to bleed
but he picks me up
wipes the blood
and kisses the tears away
he's my angel
strong and ready
my protection
and my love
but he says I'm an angel
and he knows my past
all my failures and mistakes
but he says I'm an angel
not an angel but his angel
his guardian and protection
his strength and weakness
his everything
just as he is mine


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  • 13 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Though others seem to say this flowed i have to disagree with them. Reading it, it was difficult to get the words out. It also seems in your work that you perfer repition, but as ive seen in another of your poems, it just doesnt work here. The ending was cliche, im sure you could of come up with something a tad better. Sorry for being so harsh. 3/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The one flowed freely into my heart with heavenly metaphors and beautiful imagery and is now in my favorites


  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Definately a nice and thoughtful write, when you love somebody you should always be there for them regardless. Nobody is perfect but 2 people together can be... Always capitalize I when its alone because its you. great job with this one I can relate big time.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5


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