Will you?

When i read this i automaticaly thought of the perfect way to ask a girl if hses down for me. i could just give this poem to a her n ask her wut she thinks n if shes about it then everything is straight i really like this poem alot alot alot hahaha

Will you try to change me
In the future down the road
Or walk beside me through it all
Stand tall and share the load

^^If he says no to the first one and yes to the second question, it is real love.

When life becomes a little rough
My hair has turned to gray
Will you still smile and look at me
In that special way
^^^^ a man that loves you as you are ageing is a very rare species indeed. If you have one, hold on to him!

Will you take my hand in yours
If I become too weak to try
Still lay my head upon your chest
If I should need to cry
^^^to lay your head upon a man's chest is one of the most comforting things to do:)

As the years take their toll
Our time is almost through
Will you kiss my lips and say
Forever... I'll love you.^
^^^the ultimate test and a perfect ending to a poem full of true love-questions!

A very sweet poem by you, Deana, I am sure any woman that is our age can relate to!

Hugs,

Ingrid 5/5

For writing this poem, i sure as hell would!
the flow you gave this piece was phenominal, made reading it almost elegant. this poems reinforces everything that marraige is about, good job! 5* by far

Beautifully penned! Good flow and rhythm. Great job putting this together. The rhyming is not forced. You did a really nice job!

Omg That was soo Damn Cutte YO!! awwww lol