This doomed world

by Nate the philosopher   Aug 28, 2008


This doomed world
will rot in its own sins
for killing ones fellow man
for draining mother nature's veins
for creating wepons to kill ones enemy
for burning holes into the o-zone
this poor world will burn for mans own faults
all those who have done wrong to this world will cause it to burn
this poor world is doomed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kianna

    Wow this is exactly how i feel
    good job
    5/5

    ~Kianna

  • 17 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    As you write more, your poems become more pessimistic.

  • 17 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Its good kinda like one of my poems called the end

    5/5
    kiwi

  • 17 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Damn it! thats the same way i feel!

    ughhhhh!

    tells the truth 10/5

    ~tia

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