I love you more

by Kris   Aug 29, 2008


As i take that shot of whiskey
i try to fake a smile one last time
the smile turns to frown
brightened eyes turn to tears
the only addiction i know now is the one on my breath.

i wanna take that shot of whiskey
i wanna smoke that cigarette
but i think of you

you disappear and the bottle is still full
when you re turn its emptied and I'm passed out dead in my own heartless sorrow of free will..

i never gave up in my life but I'm thinking its time..
you know some cowboys like me go out like that..

humm but i guess you're not here too see...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    Yah i had Tim Mcgraw - i need you on repeat and thats what came out

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I really liked this
    shows the questioning process
    People who just can't handle alot of things
    Drowned there pain and sorrow with alcohol,
    Whiskey and most times they don't make it
    But towards the end they realise what they
    are doing is wrong and thats when it's to
    ;ate to change things.
    Loved it.
    5/5
    kortney

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