December

by Minkus   Aug 30, 2008


I like it best like this
When a frigid blue tinges everything:
The newborn snow that blankets the hinterland
in the middle of December
under an icy moon, pale as a queen in death
but much more ready to come alive again...
When that frosty cerulean, its tint like a steely iris--
never wavering or flinching--
lies like a cobweb over the untouched tundra,
and tiny crystals grip the brittle needles of the pines
while the fallen snowflakes from clouds on the sharp horizon
press the branches groundward;
When the kniving gusts are still miles away,
and haven't yet disturbed the pristinity of it.
I wish I could stay here forever--
never having to search to find this cold beauty--
never needing to flee from the heat that so sears me--
never wanting for someplace to sit
and just...

watch.. . . .

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  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was a very beautiful description of the winter. You really painted a lovely picture in my mind. I could really imagine the way it looks from your point of view. The vocabulary was wonderful and the metaphors were used very well to describe perfectly the way you see winter. Every line was charming and I believe after reading this everyone will think of winter in a different way. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. I saw nothing wrong with it. Everything was great. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really loved the imagery in this poem and the way you described the scene was excellent. I thought the flow could have been a lot better, but all in all it was a good write..4/5 GG23