Cuttings a habbit

by tori   Aug 30, 2008


Cuttings my addiction.
the blade? my best friend.
I'm hoping to put this pain to an end
i never seem to get any relief
this pain, I'm for some reason forced to keep.

i walk around with a smile on my face
trying so hard to hide my disgrace
for i live a life of lies & fake smiles
as time goes on, the pain just piles

i need to stop, this i know is true
but i do this all because of you.
you put me through so much pain.
and cuttings the only way for my pain to be drained.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Sometimes also, a good self-harm poem is one that doesn't talk about it outright for people to judge, but get them drawn in by creating a verbal picture of the emotions you feel at the cutting moment, or the emotions that you feel afterward, that cause you to desparately wonder why. I am not saying I am perfect, but to better illistrate my point, my poem, "Fallen Again" is about cutting, but a little less outright. It at least will convey my point better. And remember, its only a suggestion, not a judgment. I cut too, so I am not saying anything about that.

  • 15 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    I understand the need to write about cutting, in order to express yourself and help unraval why you do what you do. It has also been a struggle in my own life. Just remember how many simple poems about the subject have been written. In order to make yours stand out, remember to use words that convey the most emotion humanly possible, so even those who are against cutting, will be left in aw of your writer's craft, even if they do not like the content of the poem. Keep writing.

    -T.Miko