Awsome poem!!! I'm going through a fri"end"ship like that too

Loved it...easy to relate with..keep up the great work.

So sad!! i understand this feeling so well. too bad for them beause i'm sure they lost a very good friend... love the poem, and your style! keep writting you are really good!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

It's always the worst thing to lose a friend. Unfortunately I know all too well of that. Great job portraying the emotions.

This is a really great poem - in the 6th verse it should be "too" not to, but other than that, no critique i get it. especially the part about not hating someone who doesn't even exist . . . and i know what you mean about even the important people being just like everyone else at the end of the day. great writing ;)

Great poem keep up the good work :)

Excellent poem about a thing that happens every day, 5/5. Em