Eclipse

by Fanny   Sep 8, 2008


Your the moon of my night
but you act like the sun cause your bright
Your eyes are the shiniest star
I try to look close at the stars like your eyes but they're both far
Your smile is the blue sky
Your lips are like the wind when it passes by
your touch is like a cold winter cause i feel shivers down my spine
Your words is like the rhythm of the rain
Your separation from me is like a storm, it leaves disaster and pain
but when were with each other i see you, my moon
and at the time i hope i could see my eclipse soon.

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P.S When i say i want to see my eclipse soon, it means that i want to see the guy looking beautiful like the moon but bright as the sun =) hope you like the poem!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hermosa

    You put so much feelings in this poem... your so young yet you know how to explain what your feeling so well...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan

    Aww.. that's cute. It's nice to see the world have sappy people still, me included. Nice job

    -Dan