Autumn Rays (Haiku)

by Mr. Darcy   Sep 15, 2008


Forest floor dances
Its' shaded shimmering shroud
Over veil of gold.

M. Moran
17.50
15.09.08

Haiku - A Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Haiku often reflect on some aspect of nature.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice imagery. I would have used different wordage in line 2 but overall a good one.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I absolutely adore this haiku, very well-written...Good work, such vivid imagery in such little words....Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Michael,

    I so love Haiku's!
    Congratulations on this gem:)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

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