A Goodbye

by Mark   Sep 16, 2008


The tears in your eyes
the warmth of your hands
the innocence in your presence
A goodbye to your beloved essence

the red in my eyes
the sadness in my soul
the silence appears
A goodbye with streaming tears

the road to heaven
the road to hell
the ending, no longer I care
A goodbye forever blows in the air

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  • 15 years ago

    by TheRedWomanAndherBagofLife

    I actually think the commas works somehow.??..lol..very touching indeed..

  • 15 years ago

    by Juliet

    That was a very good poem. i'm not sure if the commas were necessary, however. i like the images that you were able to depict with your few words.

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