Forbidden

Beautifully written,

It's amazing.

..a secret, keep it quiet, please don't tell.

I love this poem, it's flow and theme are all pleasing.

You begin with defining words in the whole stanza. Forbidden love, lust, secrets kept and always trust.
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This holds so much weight and sets the scene for the rest of the poem.

Fobidden friends...and that one lie!!
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This one lie jumps out at me as being very important. Lying can ruin a lifetime of trust, it can penetrate the uninpenetrable, even love!!

Forbidden conversations, always remember those times we had.
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Sounds like a farewell to dialogue that will never be repeated again, friends no more!

Forbidden memories, forbidden today and forever..
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This is so final, so definite..there is just no way back.

This poem is filled with painful regret and brimming with sadness. Although it suggest a relationship of 3 and because of it a air of seediness, it is still very sad to read and makes the reader feel sorrow for the loss of a great potential love that never reached its hights.

Well done on this poem and welcome to the club. :)

Michael

Beautiful :) I always admire when people can describe so much, so well, and with so few words :)