Times when I Remember Most

by latin girl   Jun 6, 2004


When there's a cool breeze blowing and smell of food is throught the house and where there's a silent sort of peace that you can just barely recongnize...
When there's people mowing the lawn...
and kids running on the streets..
Also birds flying to their nests..
Even more when I dial your old number and remember you have a new number.
Worst is when i ring your old house's doorbell and expect to see you answer it..
these are the times when i remember most

~please critique..this poem is dedicated to my bestfriend nicole who moved away.. Please tell me what you think~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    I liked this poem, it's format is unique, and it's wording is good.. I liked it alot. And i'm sorry to hear your friend moved away, that's alwayz so hard to have happen. good Job!!

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler