You

by jessica   Sep 30, 2008


You are the guy,
You touched my soul,
You made me laugh when I felt down,
You are my friend,
But I've grown to luv you,
You are so close,
Yet so far away,
But I'd really like to tell you...
That I really luv you!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is a really cute love poem, but I think you use "you" to much. "luv" should be "love" and in my opinion, I think you could add a lot more to make the poem better and extend it. Otherwise than that this was a short but nice piece. Take care, 4/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    ME! :) lol 5/5 good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    If you really loved him you would use l o v e not l u v but thats just me and welcome to best-love-poems.com.

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