Comments : Two months from the unheard...

  • Your so-called jokes and care and concern,
    They only make my heart burn.
    The more I think about it the more I realize,
    That you only caused these tears in my eyes.

    And yet again they are there.
    Why can't you just leave and go away with your false care.
    I don't want you in my life and I don't need you,
    Cos you were never there when I really needed you.

    THat's really powerful and sad.
    heart wrenching.

  • 15 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    DAAAAAAANNG you can write!

    Amazing

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I can feel the emotion in this one that sadly I am certain that many can relate. This well written poem thouched my heart with unheard words I have also awaited

  • So sad!
    love the whole poem overall
    the emotion flows very well.
    Hopefully you feel better!!

    Keep it up and don't stop writting you have so much talent!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Nicely composed sad poem, Keep it up...
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