I love poems that make me think with the meaning not apparent on the surface! Your title was flawless and quite a tool to capture my attention and have me curious to read more. Your word choice here was just amazing and the atmosphere you created was a pleasant one. There was power, depth and meaning thoughout this piece and it showed that you took a lot of time to craft such a masterpiece, and it showed! :] Very thought provoking and could be decoded in many ways which made it an interesting piece for anyone.
"Innocent feet fumble along piled gravel,
wincing at the roughness of a lonely earth--
outweighing the beauty of this child."
^Very powerful and eye catching beginning stanza. The imagery here was flawless and your word choice was effective in expressing what you desired.