Very nice word use. Great imagery! Awesome poem!

This is one of the greatest poems i have read... it tells about how precious love is that no specific thing can describe it.. the flow is really good and the words are magnificent...Well, i've got nothing to say anymore...lol..

but still fantastic job...

you got my vote 5/5...

^__^

"A mysterious start, a mysterious end."
`Don't use the same word in every line, perhaps you'd consider finding a synoymn or different word for the second mysterious.

`First stanza and second have great word choice. Flow/rhyming were nearly flawless.

Your wording was really unique I thought, there were some places where you didnt need to capitolize words but you did. Otherwise, I thought you did a decent job on this. 5/5.

I loved your use of similies your express yourself. It painted an nice image in my mind with your wonderful choice of words. Your rhyming here was flawless and you got what you wanted to say across nicely. Just a beautiful love poem and well written.

Well done.
I'm glad I read it.
*5/5*

Your writing skill surpasses my first attempt at a love poem I am sure

It is perfect to my taste and I would not change a word

The poem flowed wonderfully inside the rhyme scheme with content with meaning that touched my mind, heart, and soul

Well done 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

I love how specific and descriptive this was. Each line seemed to be well thought out and created a nice image in your mind. nothing less than a 5, it was great.

Amazing job! im speechless! :)