Time is Ticking

by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx   Oct 12, 2008


The clock is ticking
time is running out,

Where are we going now?
Life is like waiting a room

You sit there until your time comes,
But until then what do we do with our lives

Do we live life to the fullest?
Or do we wast our life away know our time could come any moment?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Niiice!

  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Its a good poem all in all, but i understand about the typos. i agree about the changes from EmoBritBoo. good poem all in all, 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    Cool dude,leaves me wondering=)5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I like it, but a couple of things.

    The clock is ticking
    time is running out,
    ^ I love this line ! !

    Where are we going now?
    Life is like waiting( ) room
    ^ I think u meant to put an 'a' there.

    You sit there until your time comes,
    But until then what do we do with our lives until are time comes?
    ^u didn't need to repeat 'until your times comes'

    Do live life to the fullest?
    Or do we wast our life away know our time could come any moment?
    ^ a very common question.

    overall I like it. 4/5