Autumn Woods

by Brittany C   Oct 15, 2008


Crystalline stream cool and soft
reflecting the autumn sun
that shines through the arms of many trees.
Their leaves of red, orange and yellow
Sway in the fresh crisp breeze.

The woodland birds sing
sweet little melodies,
as the sun slowly sets
splashing gold, orange
and pink over the fluffy clouds.

hmm, this is a lot shorter then what I would like it to be. I am open to any suggestions.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jaymi Lynn

    Good poem... very tranquil. I could feel the calm energy off of your imagery.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Amazing!!!!

    5 great job(: x

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    I think this is a fine poem! good imagery

  • 12 years ago

    by Mario

    Love it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I like how reading through the poem , one feels a warmth of being wrapped within autumn. Its feels good imagining aurulent leaves surfing the winds. Great write. 5/5

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