by Countess of Monte Cristo Oct 19, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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This is a world of liars. |
by Em
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Wow, this is another one of your true and very inspirational poems.The only thing I can say is that in this line > "And if too much people ride on it." in the last stanza, the "much" should be "many." Other than that flawless, 5/5. Em |
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I like this poem eventhough it's full of frustration! :-) |