Friendship

by claire   Oct 20, 2008


She walks alone in the hallways
With friends right by her side
They don't know what she's going through
Or how many smiles she's lied

With her lips sealed tight
And her thoughts wide open
She walks through life
So alone surronded by friends

Her lies become see through
Her smile starts to slip away
Her lips wont move
She doesn't have anything to say

With her lips zipped
And her thoughts wide open
She walks through life
So alone surronded by friends

She will never be alone
I'll catch her if she falls
She will never be alone
I will catch her tears

I will stand beside her through, and through
I will stand beside her no matter what she'll do

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was really good. I liked the way you wrapped it up. Again, nice work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    With her lips zipped
    I'd change zipped to sealed tight .
    And her thoughts wide open
    She walks through life
    So alone surronded by friends
    And since the rest of the poem rhymes , this stanza is really out of place . And repeating it a second time doesn't really work .

    The over all idea is really good though , you just don't quite got it yet . Play with it a little . 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mazie

    This is really good. its amazing. i dont really like using that word because it sounds like my name but in this case it needs to be used.. this poem is how i am.

    Mazie

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