Heartbreaker

by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX   Oct 26, 2008


You left my heart broken,
your smile faded away,
our words left unspoken,
my bleeding heart betrayed.

My blackened tears rolled down,
streaking my burning cheek.
My lips whisper no sound,
my body shudders weak.

Tearing holes in my chest,
my soul weakened by pain,
screaming out in protest,
by answers i can not gain.

Scaring my flesh and blood,
stabbing me in the back
drowning in salty floods,
from your verbal attack.

I only wish you could see
how much i hate your soul.
I have but one request,
give back the heart you stole.

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  • 14 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Aww this is so sad, I can really relate which makes it very touching to me. Anyways this is a very nicely written piece, the flow is amazing!! the first stanza is a great opener, and the last two lines are a perfect ending, although i might suggest putting this under a different genre maybe 'lost love' or something

  • 15 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Oh hell i love the ending there. the wya you did the ending simply astounding i was not expecting it at all. in the 3rd stanza 4th line i would change it 2 " by the anwers i can't gain"
    - Raindrops 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! It's of the nicest poems ever.. I love it 5/5

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