Would you fall in love with me

by tigerdan   Oct 26, 2008


Would you fall in love with me
If you looked my way
Allow me to steal the time away

Would you fall in love with me
If you heard my heart play a sweet melody on my
guitar
Saw inside, a bright heavenly star

Would you fall in love with me
If you gazed into my eyes
Saw that my skin, was only a disguise

Would you fall in love with me
If you noticed my arms opened wide
To capture your unsuspecting love inside

Would you fall in love with me
If you were to kiss me today
Would you allow me to take your breath away

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nella

    Oh yes totally ..lol :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    What a wonderful title!!..
    I think if anyone was given such a poem,She would fall in love wz u;);)..
    I liked the repetition that u used and I think the flow was good..
    Great job;)
    Keep it up;)5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! soo cute

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    I LOVE this.
    great job! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Lol i like the change it is very good

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