Wishes

by ben   Oct 28, 2008


I wish I was ur man
the only 1 you'd want
wishes are only dreams
nd dreams are ment for sleeping
so all in all I no I wont end up wit ur love
so the point of trying has now become nothing at all
no point at all so why do I live
why do I still care
so no matter what the dream
or how long it lasts
for me it'll never be enough
so in my heart Iill dream of u
and carry on
if I decide to stay around that long
so goodbye my love till next we meet
in heaven or hell i'll be down 6 feet.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    It was good for what it is. Do you text a lot? Still, not bad. The way you leave it is up to you, although, most everyone else would work on some of that spelling. Keep going.

  • 15 years ago

    by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

    Well i thouht it was good.

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