Despairity (Triquatrain )

by Rachel RTVW   Nov 1, 2008


Sands of time, a world sublime
This unforgiving life
Try you may, and though you pray
The pain cuts like a knife

Easier each day, or so they say
Time will heal the saying goes
Tightening rope, losing hope
Despair that no one knows

Wish for good, misunderstood
How could things get worse
Strength diminished, patience finished
Your suffering destiny's curse

Thinking negative, no more to give
Live each day as it's your last
If you were gone, they would go on
Left with memories of the past

Gone but not forgotten, begotten
A shame things turned out this way
When in need, a friend indeed
Came to save the day

Others too busy, drama makes you dizzy
They live their life the same
Should be so glad, their life isn't this sad
And who should carry now the blame

~~~Triquatrain~~~
The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme
with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2
and 4 do not.

Rhyme Pattern:

(a,a)
b
(c,c)
b

(d,d)
e
(f,f)
e

(g,g)
h
(i,i)
h

. . . and so on.

The groupings in the parenthesis are on one line separated by a comma. This poem can be of
any length or subject and does not require perfect meter.

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Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    An intensely sad poem, written in what appears to be a very difficult format.
    I got all sad reading it and felt sorry for the one you described here...I think I know who it is:/

    Beautiful poem, Rachel:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Great job!! i really like it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I enjoyed reading this. The use of this form was excellent and the emotions are heartfelt. I applaud you on a job well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Very nice! and great job following the rhyme scheme. very emotion-felt. thanks for sharing!

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this form also the write itself is really good. So much of it is so true about life and people. I've not heard of this form..should try it. Excellent write.
    Take care.