Wow... i could imagine that in my mind. it was so sad and deep. with emotions that showed. and to answer your question.. yes i would care. a whole bunch amiga. but it was awesome n a big WOW!! from me.. keep it up

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

That was really sad! I love it. That is so much what I feel sometimes. Will anyone care? I care for ya girle. Take some cake and enjoy life!

ITS A WORK OF PURE ART
I MEAN I HOPE YOU DONT FEEL LIKE THIS
BUT THIS IS TRULY BEAUTIFUL
KEEP WRITING!!!
srry for caps

This was very vivid and greatly detailed. i like this because i know many people can relate..
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ps.suicide is never the solution, its just an easy way out for someone who has had enough but an open door for heartache from those who care.

OMG - one of the best suicide poems ive read, you have captured every word perfectly! some spelling mistakes in the 1st few stanzas so you might want to edit them, but OMG - it was freakin awsome! i loved the fact you gave three examples then at the end didnt choose one fate but all three, excellent!

IBE
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I could picture everyone of these in my mind. This is an excellent peice of work. I like your style, not only cuzz I can relate but because youu have potential.

Suicide isn't the answer tho, I've been there many of times, but it only makes things worse.

I'm sorry if youu feel like this, if youu need anyone to talk to im here.:)

Anyways, I rely did like this writing. 5/5

Again. Amazing. This is my favorite!

One of the best, i loved it sooo much! <3