A True Feeling (villanelle)

by Sweetdream   Nov 3, 2008


My promise is to you,
without you I would fall,
real feelings are so few,

vows till death shall be true,
My devotion stands tall,
my promise is to you,

I will never be un-true,
you make my heart beat stall,
real feelings are so few,

all my fears leave on cue,
for you I give my all,
my promise is to you,

I have long paid my due,
been made to feel so small,
Real feelings are so few,

once I was somber blue,
pressed up against a wall,
my promise is to you,
Real feelings are so few.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    If you gave me a chance I would never leave you. If I was your Savior I would stand by your side until the very end.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    Darn it's such a shame the person I wrote it for left me... Byt i guess it did turn out to be a lovely poem... Thank you

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    "This truly is a touching poem. I almost can't writing anything to explain how this poem made me feel. To have love? I wish I could understand what it's like to have love. This poem gave me site of what true love is!

    Simply Amazing!

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Sweetdream