We The People

by Daisy if you do   Nov 4, 2008


Relict of a union
Formerly united
Blinded difference
ultimately divided

Tears shed for milk
Bitter is the honey
Bees become extinct
No pollinating money

Voices undisturbed
beneath the rubble
Justified in thought
causing no trouble

"We the People"
having no eyes
Dialect too vague
Over deafening cries

    report violation
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  • 17 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    I like the effeects used in this piece, few words in each line but all says so much clearly. It was in the last stanza that really got me and tied the emotion.
    Lovely piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a good theme to write a poem. Thought provoking indeed. Significant write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I'd pick my favorite part but by the end it was the whole poem lol You said a lot in these small well worded lines, very thought provoking. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wishmaster

    SWEET! Like it a lot!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    you did an awesome job on this poiece. This should get a lot of people thinking.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

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