Desired love <3

by anonymous lover   Nov 5, 2008


Staring when you are walking,
not noticinng how much I care,
hoping that you will talk to me this morning,
which I so not dare.

You attempt to discount my glances,
and dull becomes my heart,
feeling like behind some fences,
so far apart.

Like a baby, not knowing what's happening around you,
I would love showing you that my feelings for you are real,
but knowing that you are not thinking about me as I do,
I have to cope with the pain I feel.

Waiting for the right moment to come and stay,
devoted my heart will beat for you,
till then trying to find the right words that are to say,
I hope you will fall in love with me too.

Copyright 2009 D. Albert-Weiss

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  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a great poem reflecting such passionate desire

  • 15 years ago

    by megan

    I really liked this poem it has alot of emotion in it and it isnt very long yet it conveys so much great job!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    I don't really critique much so don't expect that but this was good i really don't know what else to say

  • 15 years ago

    by eponine lovefool

    Love this dominique!!
    i know how you feel!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    I like the line
    Like a baby, not knowing what's happening around you
    Very strong showing of ignorance.

    Great job.

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